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写作题 67. 说明:下图是关于网络购物原因的调查结果,假定你是调查员,请根据下图信息拟写一份书面汇报。
Reasons for Shopping Online

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本题考查应用文——调查书面汇报
调查类写作常用“少量文字+表格或图表”的形式来命题。
一、篇章结构
1.开门见山地交待调查的时间、对象、主题等。
2.描述调查结果,一般是描述表格中数据所反映的情况,数据间的主要差异或趋势,或有的还要求谈谈数据所反映出来的问题,并分析原因。
3.提出个人观点或对解决该问题提出建议。
4.  一般用一般现在时态。

  二、模版句式
1.交代调查的时间、对象和主题的套语。
首先要交待某人在什么时候在哪些人中就什么问题进行了调查。常用套语有:
(1)  I have recently made a survey among 300 boys and 300 girls in my class about their purposes of surfing the Internet. 最近我对我班的30名男生和30名女生进行了调查,看他们上网做什么。
(2)Last week,we did/conducted/carried out a survey among all the students in our school on the time they spent in sleeping every day. 上周,我们就每天的睡眠时间对全校学生进行了调查。
(3)Recently the safety of school buses has attracted more and more public attention, and it is becoming a serious problem, so in our class we have held a heated discussion on the causes and solutions.
(4) Recently  in our school we made a survey which shows that more and more students have become near­sighted. According to the survey we find  that ...
(5) Recently  in our school we made a survey on whether middle school students should wear long hair.

2.描述调查结果的套语。
(1)From the above table,we can conclude (that) over 20% of the teenagers are addicted to smoking.根据上表,我们可以得出如下结论:超过20%的青少年吸烟上了瘾。
(2)As is shown in the above table,Senior Three students spend the least time in sleeping.如上表所示,高三学生睡眠时间最少。
(3)As can be seen from the table above,more than 70% of the students have formed a very good habit of studying.从上表可以看出,70%以上的学生已经形成了良好的学习习惯。
3.描述数据所反映的问题的套语。
        在描述调查结果所反映出来的问题时,我们可以用非限制性定语从句或分词短语来表达。如:
(1)30% of the students questioned say they think it better not to have physical exercise,which shows(mirrors, reflects, reveals ) that these students lack the awareness of keeping healthy.在被调查的学生中,有30%的人说,他们认为最好不要进行体育锻炼。这表明,这些学生缺乏保持健康的意识。
(2)Only seven percent of the students are interested in looking up new words in the dictionary,showing(mirroring, reflecting ) that owing to their laziness,these students would rather be given everything by their teachers.只有7%的学生喜欢利用词典查生词,这表明这些学生由于太懒,宁愿老师包办一切。
4.阐述个人观点或建议的套语。
(1)As far as I am concerned,effective measures should be instantly taken to help students to spend more time on sleep. 在我看来,应该立即采取有效措施来帮助学生获得更多的休息时间。
(2)From my own perspective,we should take action to help students to make good use of their study time.在我看来,我们应当采取措施帮助学生好好利用学习时间。

【参考范文】
Reasons for Shopping Online
As we can see from the chart, shopping online has been dramatically popular among consumers. In addition, more and more people consider it as the best way of purchasing what they want. There is no doubt that shopping online has brought great changes in people’s daily life.
Several factors contribute to such changes. Above all, the main reason why people choose shopping online is that the price online is much lower than that in stores. People can save much money if they buy the same thing in stores. Moreover, with the fast development of delivery services, it only takes two or three days for consumers to receive their goods ordered online. Finally, a wide variety of choices, some products only available online, sufficient product information are also essential factors for people to shop online. All these reasons result in fast development of the online shopping.
Shopping online has changed the way of shopping a lot. I do believe people will benefit from the change in the future.

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